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Can't think! Someone help me Think!

WishUponAStarr44: translation- submit more poems
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This is what i have to resort to to understand these big words on this site

Ok Carly.... the thing is... this isn't the sort of thing that's going to appeal to an audience. That isn't a reason to write of course, I write to let off feelings too. It's just.... to go on deviant it has to have more of an art-like quality. Deviant Art. Anna is rather right, your stuff reads like a blog entry. Poetry should flow.... words leading into another. You need to free yourself a bit and keep trying. Let the words come from the tip of your pen or fingers or whatever...not the consious part of your mind. You can't force true poetry.

Oh my gosh yesterday was aweful. Like at the game. First it starts off with me doing a V spin instead of a flutter doing Star Wars. Then during Funky I screw up. Like forget the song halfway through. Then Austin Powers was the killer. First our spacing was off because we've only practiced on the field like 2 times, so I end up hitting Lauren. Then I drop my poms, get yelled at to get them off the line so run and get them off, then IT happens. because I had to run from field right to field left. IT was bad. like only close friends know bad. then all during rocky i wanna cry. can't smile. then get off field, and person 1 comes up to me and goes "Watch where you're going next time!" me: start crying.
Person 2: "we need to work on spacing."
me: "we were only on the field once! we needed to work out on that field!" me continue to cry.
i think the band was scared of me. they were nice and were like no one saw that but oh well. i think the guys had thought i was an ogre and when i cried got scared. oh well. not good. then person 3 reminds everyone about IT. yea. not good. me cry all of 3rd quarter.

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